Another Cobalt Excerpt
Amber watched me from her own chair, hazel eyes focused on my face.
“Hi,” I said.
“Hi.”
“You were sleeping when I came in,” I explained.
“You were sleeping when I woke up.”

My grandfather, far more tired than either of us, was himself still asleep, his chest rising and falling, rising and falling. You never really think about breathing until you’re worried someone is going to stop. I started matching breaths, breathing when he breathed, exhaling when he exhaled. As long as the chest moves, there is still some sort of hope.

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

Love.

So in the film of this one, will you play the girl or the Grandfather?

mm said...

I guess your vacation relit the flame of blogging, eh? BURN ON BABY!

Alex said...

Great David. I get to play the girl!

David Oppegaard said...

Thanks peeps. I'm feeling the love.

Geoff Herbach said...

I want to play the girl, Alex. Please.

David Oppegaard said...

Don't worry, everyone. My next work features an all female cast of sexy debutantes trying to save their roller rink from being sold to a beautiful team of female corporate scumbags. I play a meaty blond with a no-nonsense apporach to snow ball skating.

Alex said...

Fine. I'll be the grandfather. Sheesh.

Whatever you are smoking David, I want in.

Anonymous said...

Hmmm, I enjoy and excel at rollerskating. Acting...not so much.

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