I'm starting the third part of Leo Tolstoy's Anna Karenina today and I must say, this Russian fellow certainly can describe something. This is one paragraph from around pg. 152:
Spring was a long time unfolding. During the last weeks of Lent the weather was clear and frosty. In the daytime it thawed in the sun, but at night it went down to seven below; there was such a crust the carts could go over it where there was no road. There was still snow at Easter. Then suddenly, on Easter Monday, a warm wind began to blow, dark clouds gathered, and for three days and three nights warm, heavy rain poured down. On Thursday the wind dropped, and a thick grey mist gathered, as if concealing the mysteries of the changes taking place in nature. Under the must waters flowed, ice blocks cracked and moved off, the muddy, foaming streams ran quicker, and on the eve of Krasnaya Gorka the mist scattered, the dark clouds broke up into fleecy white ones, the sky cleared, and real spring unfolded. In the morning the bright sun rose and quickly ate up the thin ice covering the water, and the warm air was all atremble,, filled with the vapours of the reviving earth. The old grass and the sprouting needles of new grass greened, the buds on the guelder-rose, the currants and the sticky, spirituous birches swelled, and on the willow, all sprinkled with golden catkins, the flitting, newly hatched bee buzzed. Invisible larks poured trills over the velvety green fields and the ice covered stubble, the pewit wept over the hollows and marshes still filled with brown water; high up the cranes and geese flew with their spring honking. Cattle, patchy, moulted in all but a few places, lowed in the meadows, bow-legged lambs played around their bleating, shedding mothers, fleet-footed children ran over the drying paths covered with prints of bare feet, the merry voices of women with their chattered by the pond, and from the yards came the knock of the peasants’ axes, repairing ploughs and harrows. The real spring had come.
He describes things so well, when I start on these passages I cringe, knowing my own writing is so below anything like this.
8 comments:
No one wants to comment on tolstoy, eh?
Well, I'll give you Tolstoy!
Freedom!
Mention rocking, everybody wants in. Mention Tolstoy and no one loves you. I love you Dave. My love is not conditioned upon your various moods (happy, sad, angry). I watched you lie on the floor with a tiny but muscular dog. You shouted at the dog over and over: I'm a dog. Beautiful.
I think perhaps you could read something not quite so..., well, you might feel better about your own writing if you read a little Susan Sontag instead.
What's wrong with Susan Sontag? Why'd you pick on her? Jacqueline Susan I could see. Or Susan Block. But Susan Sontag? Against Interpretation? On Photography? What's wrong with Susan Sontag?
I only read the blue parts of this post. And I'm not afraid to say it. However, I read all of the stories you sent me, Op, so I think that says a lot about you vs. Tolstoy. Because I am the definitive vote.
Captain, that dog is a rare spirit, and so are you.
Michelle, maybe I will go re-read the fourth Left Behind book to make myself feel better. A monkey could write better than those guys.
Viney, thank you for your patronage. Too bad you're not a book editor for Harper Billion Books.
Time update: it's 2:30 AM.
Susan Sontag just popped into my mind, so I went with it.
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